The coloring is sloppy but works in some areas, especially her pigtails, the outfit however leaves a lot to be desired and would have vastly improved had the lines going across it been removed. This is really rockin though and sports a ton of great uniquenees to it, the eyes are really neat and vibrant and have a really interesting distinct artistry to them, and the freckley blush worked really effectively the way you did it. Good job!